The chiasm card has been overplayed.
But mostly, in Western church, it is unplayed.
We miss a lot of what the biblical writers intended when we neglect
the structural and literary devices that were so common in the ancient
world and literature.
For any scratching their head, here below are excerpts from my primary post
introducing chiasm and inclusio, with biblical examples(
Chiasm and Inclusio)
A principle of spiritual warfare is there’s not a demon behind every
bush.
But sometimes some bushes hide demoms.
And there’s not a
bush behind every demon, either.
So it is with structural
techniques like chiasm (definition)
and inclusio (definition) Once you
are attuned to seeing them in Scripture (and most ancient literatiure)
it seems they are everywhere.
Sometimes they are.
Who can
argue that “the first
shall
be last/
the last shall be first” is a
chiasm?
A-B-B-A, X pattern.
But often the chiasm is wide
enough to spotlight and intended embedded theme in between the
endpoints.
And to really help us get what the Spirit is
saying…structurally.
People remember how to perform a piece of
music by using musical notations on scale. A similar solution to the problem of
remembering how to perform a piece of dance has been solved with the use
of Labonotation. In antiquity, it seems most written documents were
intended to be read aloud, hence to be performed. The purpose of
writing was
to facilitate remembering how the document went when one read it aloud. But how did one make paragraphs or mark
off units in a document read aloud? It seems that the main way to mark off a unit was to use
repetition of words and/or phrases at the beginning and end of a unit,
either alone (as in Matt 5:3, 10,”…for theirs is teh kingdom of
heaven) or in parallel bracketing fashion (as John 1:18). The Greeks
called such parallel brackets a chiasmus, after one half of the letter
“chi” (our ‘X”), thus “>.”
-Social Science Comementary on the Gospel of
John, p. 295, emphasis mine.. a free read online
here.
Here
is just one of many charts one can find online (click it to enlarge)..
This Noah one is classic; most Bible teachers know it’s really there,
but we fear showing you stuff like this, as soon you’ll find it even
where it is not! (:

The
chart above is found here,
and the accompanying article offers several more helpful examples.
Check
out the entire gospel
of John structured chiastically on p.
295ff of
this click
through
to
the book quoted earlier (p 295ff).
And
the point being…well, between the points: the midpoint.
God
remembering Noah is meant to be seen as the point of the passage.
And
inclusio:
Len Sweet is on to something, suggesting a Bible-wide inclusio. How wide and big
can these things get? Wouldnt this cue us and clue us in to the heart
message of the whole Book?
Check
it out.
Ever notice Matthew starts with “His name will be
called Emmanuel, which means ‘God with us.’
And
ends…very last sentence…with “I will be with you.”?
No accident.
And neither is the
midpoint and message of the gospel: “I will be with you” (18:20).
In Jesus, God is with us.
Jesus
is the With-Us God.
Inclusio with chiasm.
You knew
God was with us in Christ.. But now you see it as you look at Matthew
structurally..
Now, go and do likewise…
but remember,
once in awhile a cigar is just a cigar, a demon is not behind every
bush.
But more often than not, we miss inclusio and chiasm that
have been waiting for us all along.
Everyone has heard “the last shall be first, and the first shall be
last,” and will recognize that as a chiasm…but they get much bigger
and broader that that in Scripture. That’s when they really become
helpful in suggesting themes…and help us “get the (center)point.”
An example I just found on House Church Central:
Eccl.
11:3
A
Clouds and Rain
Eccl. 11:7
B
Light and Sun
Eccl. 11:8a
C
Consider the days of darkness
Eccl.
11:8b
D
All that comes is
breath
Eccl. 11:9a
E
Enjoy your Youth
Eccl. 11:9b
F
But
know … God will bring you to judgment
Eccl.
11:10a
E’
Enjoy your Youth
Eccl. 11:10b
D’
All of youth is breath
Eccl.
12:1
C’
Consider God before
the days of darkness
Eccl. 12:2a
B’
Sun and Light
Eccl. 12:2b
A’
Clouds and Rain
(Here
and
here are several more. The second link notes, to the delight of fellow
INFPs that chiasm is also called “introverted parallelism.”)
I also highly recommend my professor David Bauer’s book, “The
structure of Matthew’s gospel: a study in literary design,” most of it free
online here.
They get bigger. Bruno
Barnhart (an early adopter of new monasticism, by the way, podcasts here):
Peter Ellis, following the doctoral dissertation of John Gerhard,
S.J., has presented the structure of John’s gospel…as completely determined by the laws of
chiastic parallelism
-“The
Good Wine: Reading John from the Center” p. 30,
…emphasis mine
Checking out Barnhart’s charts causes one to grasp why the
temple
tantrum (a passage loaded with structural devices) appears early in Jesus
ministry in John’s (but no other) gospel, etc..
But here’s today’s story:
Mike “Dissonance
is Bliss” Rinaldi, a local filmmaker, told this at the first
“Gathering to Bless Christians in the Arts. Blake Snyder, the screenwriter
behind the classic “Save
The Cat” book (which Mike also introduced us to) became a
Christian not long before he died.
Often at this point in such a story, folks ask “Who led him to
Christ?”
Go ahead and ask.
The answer is:
Chiasm.
It happened in large part because Mike, not even knowing if such a
well-known and busy writer would respond to his email, asked him if he
had heard about chiasm.
Turns out Snyder was fascinated with it all, and Mike was able to
point out chiastic structure and shape in scriptwriting….and one
thing led to another…and then in Scripture.
All roads, and all chiasms, lead to the Center and Source.
—————

James B. Jordan, “Chiasm and Life” in Biblical
Theology Basics:
“Very much of human life is ‘there and back again,’ or
chiastic. This is how God has designed human beings to live in the
world. It is so obvious that we don’t notice it. But it is everywhere.
This shape of human life arises ultimately from the give and take of
the three Persons of God, as the Father sends the Spirit to the Son and
the Son sends the Spirit back to the Father. We can see that literary
chiasm is not a mere curiosity, a mere poetic device to structure the
text. It arises from the very life of God, and is played out in the
structure of the lives of the images of God in many ways and at many
levels. It is because human beings live and move so often chiastically,
that poets often find themselves drawn to chiastic writing. God
creates chiasms out of His inner life, and so do the images of God.
Biblical
chiasms are perfect. That is, they are perfectly matched to the human
chiasms they address and transform. As we become more and more
sensitive to Biblical chiasms, we will become more and more sensitive
to one aspect of the true nature of human life under God. We will be
transformed from bad human chiasms into good human chiasms. In this way,
becoming sensitive to chiasm can be of practical transformative value
to human life, though in deep ways that probably cannot be explained or
preached very well.
One
further thought. We saw in our previous essay that chiasms often have a
double climax, one in the middle and the greatest at the end. The food
we bought at market is put away in the cupboard and refrigerator when
we get back home. Moving forward to a final climax is what all
literature does, whether it has a middle climax or not. (Shakespeare’s
five-act plays always move to a climax in the third and in the fifth
acts.) This is just another way that human life matches literary
production, in the Bible as well as in uninspired human literature.
Becoming familiar with the shape and flow of Biblical texts will have a
transforming effect on human life.”
James B. Jordan, “Chiasm and Life” in Biblical
Theology Basics.
-link,
Michael Bull’s blog: Theology you can eat and drink
Note:
Michael Bull himself has his own book on biblical structure, “Totus
Christus: A Biblical Theology of the Whole Christ” here; condensed version,
“Bible Matrix: An Introduction to the DNA of the Scriptures” is
here).
He
draws from James Jordan (quoted above and found here),
and Peter Leithart,whose
posts on chiasm are
here)
Jordan’s articles on
chiasm in Matthew are here
and here..
Re: Chiasm and inclusio
It has been suggested that chiasm is a common, maybe subconscious habit of speakers, where to reiterate what they have said, they repeat the points, but in reverse order.
Use of chiasm may or may not be a significant aspect of oral traditions (a way of memorising material). It’s certainly fascinating for - well, people who are fascinated by this sort of thing (like myself).
Another example, I don’t think you mentioned it, is in 1 Peter 18-22 (and elsewhere), in Christ’s journey from heaven to earth, via the cross and resurrection back to heaven again.
I think I spotted one in Romans 5; the chiasm here might be:
A verse 12
B verse 13
C verse 14
D verse 15
D verse 16
C verse 17
B verse 17b - 18a
A verse 18b onwards
I’m claiming a copyright on this discovery, if indeed it is a chiasm, which also contains a massive Pauline parenthesis, the initial argument beginning in verse 12, parenthesis from verse 13 to 18a, the initial argument picked up again in verse 18b.
On the subject of Pauline parentheses, he does this again in Ephesians 3 for instance, beginning a thought in verse 1, parenthesis verse 2 - 13, completing the thought started in verse 1 in verses 14 - 21!
Is a parenthesis a kind of chiasm?
Some of the paragraph chiasms could be deliberately formulaic, maybe hymnal or creedal - eg Philippians 2:5-11.